CHAPTER 1:
Part 1
“She is just suffering from a bad fever, mate, leave her be,” the burly man shouted across the packed roadhouse diner in Outback Queensland.
Outside, the December heat reached forty-one degrees Celsius, yet the nine-year-old, Eliza, shivered violently on the dusty ground.
Her small body convulsed, a rattling sound escaping her lips with each shallow breath. Sweat plastered her fine, blonde hair to her forehead, but her skin was chillingly cold to the touch, despite the oppressive sun.
A cloud of flies buzzed around her face, landing undisturbed on her parched lips. She lay slumped against the worn tyre of a battered ute, her knees drawn up, oblivious to the world.
From inside the diner, I had watched her for a few minutes. The man, Bruce, sat at a sticky laminex table, scoffing down a meat pie, his enormous shoulders taking up half the booth. He barely glanced at her.
“She’ll be right,” he’d grumbled earlier, wiping grease from his mouth with the back of his hand. “Just got a bit of a bug.”
But Eliza didn’t look “a bit bugged.” She looked like she was dying.
The air in the diner was thick with the smell of fried food and stale beer. The clang of cutlery, the rumble of truck engines outside, and the endless chatter of sunburnt travellers filled the space. No one else seemed to notice the girl outside.
My own coffee sat untouched in front of me. A knot tightened in my stomach.
I pushed my chair back, scraping it loudly against the tiled floor. Bruce looked up, his small, dark eyes narrowing.
“Where are you off to, mate?” he demanded, his voice gruff.
“Just getting some fresh air,” I replied, trying to keep my voice even. My gaze flickered to Eliza, then back to him.
He scowled, sensing my intent. “I told you, she’s fine. Just needs a bit of a sleep.”
His tone held a clear warning. But the image of Eliza’s pale, shaking form was burned into my mind. The shiver that ran through her body seemed to pierce through the heat.
I walked past the counter, ignoring the cheerful chatter of the roadhouse owner, and stepped out into the blinding glare of the afternoon sun. The heat hit me like a physical blow, instant and suffocating.
The flies dispersed for a moment, then resettled on Eliza. Her eyes were half-open, glazed and unfocused. Her chest heaved.
I knelt beside her, the scorching bitumen burning through my jeans.
“Hey, little one,” I murmured softly, trying not to startle her. My hand hovered over her forehead. It was burning, despite the chills.
A low growl sounded behind me.
“I said leave her!” Bruce stood in the diner doorway, his face red, his fists clenched. “She’s my daughter! You got no business touching her!”
He started walking towards me, his heavy boots crunching on the gravel.
“She needs help,” I insisted, my voice firmer now. “This isn’t just a fever.”
“What would you know?” he snarled, planting himself menacingly beside me, his shadow falling over Eliza. “You some kind of doctor?”
He smelled of sweat and old beer. His eyes darted nervously around the empty car park, as if looking for someone. Or perhaps hoping no one was looking at us.
“She’s in distress,” I said, trying to meet his gaze, but he kept shifting his weight, his eyes skittering away. “We need to get her to a hospital.”
“No!” he barked, louder this time. “We’re fine. Just heading off now.”
He bent down, roughly grabbing Eliza by her arm. She let out a small, pained whimper.
“Come on, you little menace,” he hissed, trying to pull her up. Her body was limp, heavy.
As he yanked at her, her thin shirt rode up slightly. Just for a second, my eyes caught a glimpse of something beneath the hem.
A dark, purplish bruise bloomed just above her hip bone, a handprint clearly visible against her pale skin. It was still fresh, angrily swollen. But it wasn’t the worst of it.
Beneath the bruise, poking out from the waistband of her shorts, was a small, crudely fashioned pouch, secured with a dirty piece of string.
And from within the pouch, a tiny, almost luminous green crystal pulsed faintly, like a living thing.
Part 2
He snarled, tugging harder at Eliza’s arm. Her head lolled, a barely audible moan escaping her lips. As he pulled, the green light from the pouch intensified, throbbing brighter, faster. It pulsed with an almost alarming rhythm.
Bruce stiffened. His eyes, usually so hard, widened in a mixture of shock and terror. He released Eliza’s arm instantly, letting her slump back to the ground. His hand flew to his chest, clutching at his shirt. His breath came in ragged gasps.
“What was that?” I demanded, my voice hushed. The air around us felt suddenly heavy, charged.
He didn’t answer. He just stared at the glowing pouch with a look of pure dread. His face, already red from the heat and exertion, now seemed ashen, drained of color. He looked like he’d seen a ghost.
Then, the crystal flared again, but this time it wasn’t just a light. A low, resonant hum vibrated in the air, a sound I felt more than heard. It seemed to come from *inside* Eliza.
Her body, which had been limp and unresponsive, suddenly tensed. Her eyes, still glazed, flickered rapidly beneath her eyelids. She began to rise, slowly, unnaturally, as if pulled by an invisible string. Her movements were jerky, like a puppet’s.
Bruce staggered backward, tripping over his own feet, a desperate cry catching in his throat. He pointed a trembling finger at Eliza, his mouth agape.
The crystal in the pouch pulsed even brighter, and Eliza’s head snapped up. Her eyes, though still unfocused, were now wide open, staring directly at Bruce.
A faint, almost ethereal glow emanated from her body, a greenish aura mirroring the crystal. Her lips parted, and a voice, not her own, rasped out, clear and chillingly ancient: “You will not take her.”
The air grew heavy, thick with an unseen presence. Bruce scrambled backward on the gravel, fear contorting his features. He was no longer a menacing bully; he was a man utterly terrified.
Eliza, still glowing faintly, slowly turned her head, her unblinking gaze now fixed directly on me.
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